Sunday, April 1, 2007

Observations of a Beach

A lady stands before a man lying on the beach. The man has broad shoulders and big arms. The upper half of his body is tan and the lower half of his body is not. He holds himself up with his arms while he gazes out into the ocean and the sky. His long blonde hair is blown by the wind. The sky seems dark and grey and the sun is nowhere to be found. Under the man is a blue towel with red, green, and yellow stripes running horizontally through it. Next to his towel is the lady’s towel which has yellow and white stripes running through it vertically. On her towel are her beach bag and a red coat. On the other side of her towel is another person’s towel. That person is another female who is running toward the beach. The female has a light blue towel with darker blues stripes running vertically through it. From that person’s towel are foot prints of her own going towards the ocean. The female has brunette hair also being blown by the wind. The female is naked and has an hour glass shape. Her arms sways as her feet start to touch the ocean. Meanwhile the lady near the man starts unbuttoning her black blouse from bottom to top. She wears black and white floral print shorts below her blouse as she stares off into another object on the beach. She starts undressing to conform to the other nude beings that are on the beach with her.

2 comments:

@km said...

Hi, I really like this picture. It is so serene but sexy in a way too. The way the woman in touching her shirt and the fact that it is infront of the opposite sex. The romantice setting on the beach with the beautiful ocean. There is def alot of things to observe in this picture and it is so pretty as well. Great job and I am jealous you found it first haha

Aaron Deng said...

The writer has great writing, and it have very detail observation. I suggest the writer can write more about the beach and ocean. Describe the relationship between the ocean; for example, we can describe when the wave rush up the beach, what change in the beach? Do not only write about person, which make you essay less interesting. However, this is a beautiful picture. The girl is so sex, who is lying in the beach. I really like this picture. Good luck!